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Friday, June 7, 2019

persimmon






  yuk ! as i bit through the persimmon . it was  an orange persimmon .
  it smelt like an orange pear , but it was also kind of yucky  when i bit it yucky as i bit the big orange      persimmon. when i bit through the orange persimmon
  this is a big orange persimmon
  this is a biggest thing of a orange persimmon .
 
the big orange thing .was soft it was a little big orange persimmon. yucky  i don't like the brown pips
is they any more to eat .it smelled like a yucky orange persimmon
persimmon are like a street orange persimmon
they have nice nibbling at my quarter  slice i savor every single bit until
the orange persimmon .
when i bit the orange persimmon .
my mouth went wide very wide . i don't like the  pips yucky
when i bit the orange persimmon
i feeled the brown little pips it sound like a chruch orange persimmon . in my mouth  when i bit through the persimmon .it was kind of soft it was kind of yum when i put it in my mouth
1.2.3. when i bit the persimmon
the persimmon was also kind of yuck.
by lucy



   

 

2 comments:


  1. I like that you post about what you do in your classroom and how you put details in your post.I like that you made a very cool video about yourself.
    Do you always do experiments on different types of food?

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